Back to Bed – SHORT STORY

Bedroom door scary

“What?” I said, my eyes reflexively scrunching up as I turned under the duvet.

“I’m too scared to go to bed.”

They stood in the doorway, backlit by the lifeless hall light. This was an all too familiar routine, one he’d have to grow out of, but ever since Mum left he couldn’t face the dark.

Reluctantly I swung my legs into the cold, shedding the duvet, accurately inserting my feet into small slippers and walked towards him, his face blank as a freshly painted wall, hands tucked into his armpits.

“I’ll lead the way,” I said, my voice morning-thick.

We reached the of flight of stairs, and along the way I again noted the ghosts of pictures, faint grey rectangular lines on the paint, of family portraits – missing – like her.

The only light switch was at the top, an electricians error yet to be rectified.

“I’ll go up. You wait here.”

“Yes”, came the whispered reply, hesitant, slow, distant like a trans-Atlantic phone call.

I didn’t look back, I never did.

Softly my feet met the varnished pine steps, until the hallway lighting left my side, leaving me to fumble in darkness, feeling each step, counting in whispers, twenty three, twenty four…until I reached out, my fingers feeling rough carpet, eyes adjusting, seeing nothing but that pattern of darting green specks.

Stepping upwards, I felt around the corner for the familiar switch. Strange… It had the feeling of knuckles, rough skin, of fingers and a ring.

Pushing childish thoughts to one side my searching hand tripped the light, extinguishing any imagined presence.

I looked down the staircase. He wasn’t there. I waited, watching, focused on that distant patch.

“Are you coming up?” Words always sounded so lonely from here, where questions contained questions.

A shadow kissing the laminate was followed by his appearance, gripping an axe, wearing that vacant face that fear moved into each night free of charge.

Apparently the axe was for his protection, although it surprised me at first.

Mechanically, he came up the staircase, eyes fixed on me begging me not to move, more whites than pupils, axe grasped in both hands.

As he approached I shuffled off to the bedroom door, the only one other than the linen cupboard.

Turning the handle, the creaking panel-door swung inwards revealing no secrets in the poverty stricken light that filtered through, allowing me to see the carpeted floor. I noticed some stains then reached around, flipping the switch, hearing wheezing behind me.

The double bed lay motionless in the middle of the room, covered in navy sheets. The desk was unusually tidy, while the mirrored wardrobe haemorrhaged clothing.

He walked in, brushing past, making me take the end of the axe handle across the shoulder. He stopped halfway between me and the bed. Without moving his body he twisted his neck, giving me one eyeball. “It wasn’t me.”

Confused, I tried to decipher the meaning. “What wasn’t?”

“The carpet.”

I inspected the prominent brown spots of various sizes embedded in the cream. It wasn’t my business. I shrugged.

He walked to the edge of the bed and stood motionless, staring at his reflection, unbreakable eye contact, transfixed. I was losing patience then he looked down at the axe and uttered, “Youuu!”, at it, before placing it on the duvet, then peeling a corner up he slipped into bed, pulling sheets up to his neck, staring at the ceiling.

“I need you to look under the bed…” he said, so robotic and emotionless I felt a shiver crawl outwards across my skin, increasingly worried by his strange behaviour.

Hesitant, I crossed the room, stepping over the faded brown spatter marks.

“Do I have to?”

He nodded.

Crouching down, I looked at the white bedskirt with matching stains with what looked like traces of green sponge, and I felt damp seep through my pyjamas from the carpet.

I reached out, pulling the bedskirt upwards, “There’s nothing under there”, pre-loaded onto my tongue.

Leaning down, I confidently looked under, glancing briefly, releasing the cotton in shock. My breathing stopped. I was unaware of any movement in my body, my throat dried instantly.

“Well?” he said.

Trembling, I struggled to stand up, and slowly I backed away towards the door, his eyes following me, the varnished axe handle bouncing light.

“There’s…nothing there.” Turning slowly I reached the doorway and managed to say, “Sleep well, Dad”, before closing the door quickly.

I turned the landing light off and went down the stairs quieter than a cat, as if Mum wasn’t under the bed, as if everything was totally normal, as if they did actually get a divorce, as if at eleven years old I would have to run far, far away.


lion around 2

24 thoughts on “Back to Bed – SHORT STORY

  1. hihi. nice twist. Loved it. For some reason it reminded me of Mr. Poe’s “The tell tale heart”.

    Oh, and I have to ask: where do you find the inspiration to write such a great amount of short stories all the time?

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    1. thanks Frank, feedback is always much appreciated.
      As for the inspiration…I have no real idea lol For some reason or another it happens. Sometimes I just get an idea, or I hear something, read something and bam! I have a story.
      What about you? Where do your play ideas stem from?


      1. A lot from what you said but a great deal comes from short lines in music or just its titles… the little things in the right moment spawns into something new.

        I’m a sucker for Amanda Palmer, such a great inspiration, not just as a musician, but as a person too.

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      2. I think that’s a common ground among creatives. We don’t always know where an idea comes from, it just does, without science being able to define it.

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  2. Again, the twist. 😀 I thought the child was an adult and the adult a child. Dark, disturbing, and a blood-sloppy carpet…who could ask for more? Loved it, Lion.

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    1. As we say in Scotland: Ta!
      Glad I managed to confuzzle you even if only a little.
      The only bit I’d redo is the carpet bit, coulda described it a bit better, but, eh.

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      1. You did fine…every story I write, I always wish afterward I had done something different. I don’t think I’ve ever been completely satisfied with anything I’ve written, and you probably haven’t been either. It’s the writer’s curse…


  3. Nice twist. I was expecting a serial killer — yes, my mind is just like that 😀

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    1. Thanks for dropping by and the feedback, always appreciated.
      Sorry there was no serial killer, but there are psychotic lunatics in other stories of mine 🙂

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      1. I already feel at home here! I’ll definitely check back very soon.

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      2. 😀 Terrific! I’ve called the movers already.

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  4. Great story. I like him accurately putting feet into slippers. Makes sense when you realize it’s a child.

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  5. monkey wish monkey = good wordsmith like lionaroundwriting. very cool story.

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    1. Thanks monkey 🙂
      Here’s a banana for your kind words ()

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  6. Wow!

    I LOVE the pallette of words you use. Especially: “the mirrored wardrobe haemorrhaged clothing”.

    I felt the tension building, especially on the presumption you set us up for. The rest of the story fell into place – backwards – from the climax. A bit like a string of dominoes, falling away back to the start of the story.

    I just had to read it all again.

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    1. Massive thanks for your feedback Kim, truly appreciated.

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  7. Liked this very much. Thanks for the like and comment.

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  8. A very interesting twist.

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  9. All the fears of childhood in one short story. I’ll have to leave the light on tonight! Excellent job of scaring me to death.
    Oh, that’s right I did survive after all, to read another day.

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    1. I appreciate your readership as always.
      I’m glad it got some frights 🙂


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