A Simple Question – SHORT STORY

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What is the scariest film you’ve ever seen?

Their question lingered like cigar smoke in an old man’s bar evoking a smell not as sweet, forcing me to choke on the inside on a malodorous stench as soon as they finished speaking. The answer they were looking for was an 18+, by director X, detailing actors and actresses (before they too became actors), a way to engage on a commonality, to share my knowledge of film, an act of opening up to show my preference, to be judged and remarked upon, in the danger zone – one bad title away from private ridicule.

The answer I withheld rose all too quickly to my conscious, like a string-cut balloon released from the depths of a lake. I didn’t know them that well that I could say it, even flippantly, even with a manic depressed chuckle tacked on to hide the truth. And I knew even if my best friend had asked, I would have hidden the answer deep, buried under the mounds of a Yes/ No, staying generic, my minds gravedigger all too ready with the worn wooden handle, the spade itself so well used, the metal so polished and sharp it could be used as a weapon.

The correct response would have been Psycho, The Hostel, Hitchcock and George Romero. As for actors, few made a career from horror, it’s too restrictive: Hammer Horror and the likes of Christopher Lee don’t exist any more.

What could I say to the question?

Anything but the truth, which in itself sounded like a tagline to an eighties B movie, complete with near orange blood as if they’d raided a Heinz factory for the unspecial effects. Other key ingredients were the fuck it it’s good enough! first draft script, actors well versed in the Tree Method and out of synch choreography, where punches flattened opponents even with a visible two inch gap between them and the target, and exploding dye packs bled through white shirts.

What makes a film scary anyway? Bar the psychopaths, we all know the moving images are fake, a manufactured state of fiction designed to scare and titillate the hypothalamus with dolly shots and jump cuts. Strange how images and sound override our rational brain. Even frequent reminders that the characters are not real – the bloodshed pantomime – somehow manages to convince a part of the brain that it is, it must be so, look, on the screen, death and violence! I imagine it to be the same unevolved spastic region of the brain that led to my forebears seeing a stranger near their cave and senselessly without warning clubbing them on the head, killing them cold, all because the illogical thought process overrode the possibility that they might not be hostile, sensing only danger, real or otherwise.

I could tell my friend was growing impatient, their pint reduced to the last dregs that for some inexplicable reason required it be swilled around in a clockwise fashion. Also the glazed over eyes were a give away, not to mention the fact ten minutes had passed, perhaps more. Everyone else in the pub looked dead. Nobody moved as the TV above the bar churned out the afternoons racing, the sole contributor of noise, announcing King Pyjamas had won by a nose at 14/1.

As if at the snap of fingers, everything came back to life when I delivered my answer.

“The scariest film I’ve ever seen – is my life, and I have to watch it…every…day.”

Except I didn’t.

“Psycho or The Hostel,” I said, noting my pint hadn’t been touched.


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28 thoughts on “A Simple Question – SHORT STORY

  1. Scary films? Put me in mind of the Katie Melua song.

      1. “Scary Films” – it’s on her album “Pictures”.

  2. Good writing. like a string-cut balloon release from the depths of a lake. Everything well ecpressed. Made this a pleasure to read.

    1. Merci beaucoup lonelyauthor. That was my favourite line ☺

  3. great piece of writing and I love the Richard Brautigan style similes.

    1. Many thanks Chris – I’ll google Brautigan 🙂

  4. Wonderfully written…. As always Lion! 😉😁

  5. Like the twist! Good build-up and nice ending.
    Funnily enough, I re-watched Psycho recently and although there are some superb bits of film-making and acting, a some of it (especially the end) feel really corny and ham-fisted. And it’s not really that scary any more. The film that scared me most was Alien. I showed it to my eldest daughter a few years ago… and she laughed at it. Apparently the CGI generation just don’t appreciate films with latex puppets and men in monster suits.

    1. Thanks babbitman.
      Last time i watched psycho I was pretty young. The creepiest part was in the house on the hill.
      As for Alien I was never that scared by it and I was pretty jumpy as a youngster, great film though.

      1. It’s the silence that scares the bejesus out of me. Oh, and the slavering teeth and violent death. Much like Jaws, which was the first film to terrify me.

      2. Somehow my parents allowed me to watch Jaws at 4yrs old and I remember being distinctly underwhelmed, it just seemed the shark was so fake, like the plastic toy dinosaurs I had. The alien monsters were really something with that stuff dripping off them and the piston like mini mouth that did the killing.

      3. At age 7 I started reading a comic called Action which featured loose rip-offs of films such as Jaws and Dirty Harry. The shark strip was called Hook Jaw and primed me to have an utter dread of sharks. By the time I actually watched Jaws a few years later I was cacking myself. A really well put together action thriller that I can enjoy any time these days – Jaws is probably my most-watched film!
        Everything about Alien was perfectly crafted, from the desolation of the planet to the eerie alien spaceship and the eggs, and the dark recesses of Nostromo.

      4. Defo primed! lol
        I could never get around the sheer fakery of the shark, unless it’s just the fin, it is so rubbery I still can’t watch Jaws without laughing at it.
        Alien though, that’s a definite masterpiece another Ridley Scott cracker to go with Blade Runner.

      5. Here’s a link, just to show how primed I was to keep out of the water!

      6. Thats not even a great white thats a mastodon! But pretty scary comic panels, I can see how that affected you.
        Was that released before or after Jaws came out?

      7. Megalodon rather than an elephant? 😉
        It came out February 1976 pretty much riding the Jaws bandwagon (the film came out June 1975).

      8. Megalodon, thats what I was meaning lol
        Speaking of sharks if you like ridiculous, ott, bad acting and comedic yet unintentional dialogue, check out Shark Attack 3

      9. Just youtubed it. Good grief! Even worse than Mega Python vs. Gatoroid (starring 80s pop sensations Tiffany & Debbie Gibson) – https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AthAExWgzH4

      10. Its in the so terrible its amazing category 😁

      11. Just checked the clip, amazing!
        A snake actually swallowing a train, the deep voiced voice over…classic. As for gatoroids i am sure theres a cream for that lol

      12. And I don’t know how much you know about 80s pop starlets Tiffany & Debbie Gibson but one exchange between them was actually the lyrics from one of Tiff’s songs:
        “I think we’re alone now.”
        “There doesn’t seem to be any one around…”
        Classic cheesey B movie!

      13. Ive heard that one. Nicely worked into the dialogue. Sometimes the crappy b movies are the most entertaining.

  6. Great use of the stream-of-consciousness narrative, it made a simple question almost philosophical! I also really liked your description of the pub at the end.

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